Please identify an additional poetic device used in your novel (not metaphor, personification, alliteration, or simile). Please include the page number where you found the example. Potential devices may be rhyme scheme, allusion, onomatopoeia, symbolism, imagery, etc.
Please identify which device you're using along with the example from the text.
"The hum and thrum of crosstown traffic sings to her" - Street Love - Poetic Device: onomatopoeia Aaron C hr2
ReplyDelete"The hum and thrum of crosstown traffic sings to her" - pg 67- onomatopoeia
ReplyDeleteImagery
ReplyDelete"she wore no coat, her head was bare, no rubbers on her feet,
nothing but worn-thin school clothes standing between here
and the teeth of winter.
i brought her in.
sat her on a chair by the stove.
put a mug
the chipped one
of warm broth in her hands."
I can see Leanora wearing thin clothes, freezing, sitting inside at one of Sara's chairs by the stove holding an old broken mug.
Page 11
One of Those Hideous Books Where the Mother Dies: pg.172-"Bong. Bong! BONG! BONG!"-Onomatopoeia.
ReplyDeleteLove That Dog
ReplyDeleteThe words night, bright and sky, by are at the ends of the lines of the poem and they all rhyme so that would be a rhyme scheme. pg 8
An additional poetic device that is in my novel is imagery. One example is "The scent of blood high on the wind, with its traces of cold, black iron, rotted earth, dying flesh, and I stagger backward as the smell, pungent and terrible, fills my nostrils." This is a good example of imagery because it appeals to smell in many ways. That is one example of an additional poetic device that was in my novel.
ReplyDeleteImagery: "Witness", page 60
ReplyDelete"...when Sara Chickering is all smelling of spicy green tomatoes."
Repitition:
ReplyDeleteand keeps them there
and keeps them there
and keeps them there
page 31
Love That Boy Poem "Love that boy, like a rabbit loves to run. I said I love that boy, like a rabbit loves to run, Love to call him in the moring, love to call to him "Hey there, son!"
ReplyDeleteThis forms a rhyme sceem because run and son rhyme.
my poetic device is an onomatopoeia. The page number is 32 and it says, "Whisp, meow, and swish."
ReplyDelete--Kennadee W. hour: 5
Rhyme scheme:
ReplyDeleteI came to be known as
Both Tonto and Chief,
but Thursday a flower
gave me some relief.
And now it is Friday,
I long to go home.
It's tough being noble
when you're all alone.
--"Who Will Tell My Brother?" page 90
An example of imagery from the book "Tropical Secrets" is, "All over Havana shoeshine boys and candy vendors walk down the street, changing old songs into new ones." This example was found on page 109. On page 110 there is an example of onomatopoeia. "...we listen to the clip-clop of a cow's hooves...”
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ReplyDeletePage 24:
"My face feels hot
and red
and I know I'm going to cry again"
In the book "Street Love" by Walter Dean Myers, I found an example of rhyme scheme on page 4. "My game is my name" is spoken by a kid named Sledge.
ReplyDeleteHere is a story that's stranger than strange.
ReplyDeleteBefore we begin you may want to arrange:
a blanket,
a cushion,
a comfortable seat,
and maybe some cocoa and something to eat.
pg 1, Zorgamazoo
This is an example of rhyme scheme.
I found a simile on page fifty-nine.
ReplyDeleteEvenings
at home
we
study
watch tv
play cards
like a party
Imagery/ symbolism
ReplyDeleteFar From You; page 211
From Scared to Petrified
When the darkness faded
and a grayish light
filled the sky,
we saw
that the monster
had grown
to gigantic proportions
overnight.
IMAGERY: you really see a picture of how dark and alone they are.
SYMBOLISM: The monster represents the snow storm.
repetition: HARD-soft HARD-soft HARD-soft pg 101
ReplyDeleteRepetition:
ReplyDeletepg. 191
Come Home
Come Home
Come Home
Come Home
Onomatopoeia The Trail page 113- "the hisssss of the icy flakes"
ReplyDeleteI am reading "Shark Girl". An example of imagery is "This room too, with its blend of odors: turpentine, fixative, clay, and dust." Pg. 159
ReplyDeleteIn my book I found many examples of imagery. One example is "It stings and brings tears to my eyes." This is imagery because you can imagine seeing tears and feeling the stinging from them. I found this on page 12.
ReplyDelete. . . so I put mt
ReplyDeletehead against her chest and
listened to her heart
Ka-thump! Ka-thump! Ka-thump! and I wasn't
as scared
-Street Love
Shark Girl pg. 40
ReplyDeleteSymbolism
"I get a whiff of air freshoner, lemon oil, the smell of home. My heart aches."
In this example, Jane is in the hospital and when she smells lemon oil, she gets homesick because it symbolises everything in her home that is familiar like the smell of lemon oil.
Rhyme scheme can be found in All the Broken Pieces. The verse is
ReplyDeleteThere is darkness on the water.
There is darkness on the land.
There is darkness all around us,
but I will hold your hand.
page eleven
Jackson M. hour 5
Now my duck kisses his rabbit and-POOF!-it turns into a turkey. This was an example of onomatopoeia from page 240 in What my Mother Doesn't Know.
ReplyDelete-JeKayla Curtis
"The pudding was so thick and creamy," is an example of imagery in the book "Hate That Cat". This is on page 87.
ReplyDeleteShark Girl, Onomatopoeia
ReplyDelete"wow! the stack is shorter today"
HR2
Shark Girl page 215, repetition
ReplyDeleteYour life is so different.
It is wat it is.
It's not fair, and it won't ever be the same.
I know.
It should have been different.
I know.
Different.
"I put it down, feeling ti with my fingertips, trying to read it like someone who's blind. But whoever scratched that adress left nothing behind." Page 115, rhyme sceme.
ReplyDeleteShark Girl page: 173
ReplyDelete"ROAAARRRR!" -Onomatopoeia
Street Love Pg 114
ReplyDeleteShe swallows rainbows and when I put my head against her breast, I hear music.
Imagery
pg.60
ReplyDelete"Friday Night Fight."
That would be an example of rythm in the book, What My Mother Doesn't Know.
"Time passed
ReplyDeleteAs slowly
As
An icicle
Melting
When
The sun
Shines."
This is an example of imagery and can be found on page 67 of T4.